- Jan 25, 2021
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I think your storytelling is better than LP's.Sophia gets pregnant through one of her encounters and Liam is none the wiser.Then one day while Pat and Sophia are chatting in the kitchen as Liam is about to enter when Sophia suddenly burst into tears and tells Pat through her tears that the baby is not Liams.Liam upon hearing this stands shocked at the kitchen door and Sophia sees the look on Pats face turns round to see Liam standing there.Sophia shocked stands up to go to Liam and try and explain things which ends up in a massive argument and Liam walks out of the house.Sophia beside herself panicks screaming Liams name when she feels cramps in her stomach and collapses onto the kitchen floor.Pat calls an ambulance and Sophia is rushed to hospital where she wakes up confused seeing her sister besides her in tears.Sophia senses something is wrong and ask Pat what happened.Pat looks at Sophia through teary eyes and tells her that she has had a miscarriage and can no longer have children of her own.
I also have thousands of pages of storytelling.
- This is true, and it is why I was able to quickly figure out LP's personality.
- It is more of a fan fiction and I was a fan of Part 1.
Yours is more dramatic, mine is more pornographic.
However, I will never publish mine here, whether it is good or bad.
I do not want to get involved in anything that delays/stretches the story of this game or expands the story.